Unfortunately I didn’t have time to
write a passage , so I’m going to use today’s entry to explore some characters
that have been introduced.
Alice: Main character, only child,
mother is dead and father is an out-of-touch stay at home writer. This leaves
her grandfather on her mom’s side to be the closest family member she turns to.
However, *spoiler alert* her adventure begins when she finds out her
grandfather has gone missing, with some strange people asking about his
whereabouts.
Heather: Alice’s closest friend,
although they couldn’t be more opposite. Her mother owns the town bakery, where
she and Alice have part time jobs.
Billy: Local notorious bully. Comes
from old family of the town, so he’s rich and influential. Has actually known
Alice for quite a while since their mothers were high school friends. That
doesn’t stop him from treating her horribly though, or ridiculing her
absent-minded father.
Mysterious dark-haired boy: Slowly
becoming a very important part of the story, but he’s my least developed
character. Ideas involve him being rumored to being a witch’s son, being
cursed, etc. None of this is actually true, but his trouble lies with seeing
things around him connected to Rorrim that people normally shouldn’t be able to
see. His power is connected to people such as Edgar Allen Poe or Lewis Carroll,
those thought to be mad when in fact their work is tied in some way to seeing
the land of Rorrim. Alice is the only character thought to be connected to what
lies beyond the mirrors, but I’m starting to think this character has more
potential than I thought.
It has come to my attention that in
order for Alice to have an adventure in Rorrim, there needs to be some way for
my audience to know what’s happening back in our own world. I first thought I
would do this through the character of Heather, but I think it would be more
interesting to explore the character of the dark-haired boy.
I like it, having the dark-haired boy be a watcher and yet involved just enough. It's a classic that I really think your style can use to its fullest. I do have one question though, everyone thus far is connected is that significant or coincidental?
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